"Soundtrack for John Holmes' Stunt Man"

[Troy6120]

I put electric guitar over a loop a friend gave me. The loop contained only drums and bass.

I know the guitar is a bit fizzy on the leads. That was kind of on purpose.

Critique this, please. I like the honesty around here. Thanks.

http://www.acidplanet.com/components/embedfile.asp?asset=1293206&T=2406

 

[ido1957]

Sounds good - great playing and the layering works well.

 

[Troy6120]

Thanks. I'm curious as to know where the shortcomings are. I've been accused of not panning things wide enough, etc.

 

[Troy6120]

I just started working on something new. It won't have the fizzy guitar like this one has.

I'd like to make the next one better than this, so anyone, please feel free to critique this tune. I really appreciate it.