Soulful Song, Please leave some Feed (F4F!)

[YWM]

Hey guys,

Me and 2 of my friends made this song that i produced and they rapped over.

Any feedback to improve on the song will be appreciated and returned when i get the time to!

Here's the link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eYj5K5a3F3U

Thanks

 

[Tobe]

Sounds great! Needs a better vid

The bit that leaves me flat is the "all I ever do is think about you, all I ever do... etc". I think that bit needs the backups to come into focus with the lead vocal.