Song on mp3

[POLease]

Here' s a song my band wrote and recorded- http://artists.mp3s.com/artists/100/infiniti.html
My band is Infiniti and the song is "positive expressive"- This was recorded on a sp808 w/ a jp8000 & squire strat. *this is the very first recording of the song -two days after it was wrote. It has no vocals, some mistakes, and the drums are a loop from the 808 demo disk.
What do you think?(song as is, so far)

...No really..anyone.. ..even if this isn' t your style(|/|)
^ /^
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[This message has been edited by POLease (edited 03-22-2000).]

 

[MrLip]

I guess it's hard to make a complete comment without hearing the vocal part.

I like the arrangement, the drum loop especially. But I think the overall sound has a little too much presence, and there's a part around 1:11 where the guitar (it's so soft I'm not really sure) comes in where the mix sort of ebbs and swallows itself. Know what I mean?

Other than that, I thought it was good.

Cheers.