Some psycho-surfa-punkabilly from Greg_L

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Greg_L

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I wrote another one! Somebody stop me!

It's a sweet little love song about a girl who dies in a crash on her prom night and comes back to find a new man.

"Undead Teenage Queen"
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=592804&content=songinfo&songID=5997506

Here's the stupid words:

Here she comes, she's looking for me
She's searching the room for a new prom king
With cold, white skin and a rusty crown
Stains of death on her evening gown

She's an undead, undead teenage queen
She's a walkin, talkin, undead teenage queen

It was '58, a debutant dream
Well there was one dead girl when the car careened
It was late at night when he lost control
Wrapped daddy's car around a telephone pole

She's an undead, undead teenage queen
She's a walkin, talkin, undead teenage queen

(hip-daddy-o guitar solo)

Here she comes, she's looking for me
I go to her, I got what she needs
With an evil smile and kiss thats cold
She grabs my hand and she takes my soul

She's an undead, undead teenage queen
She's a walkin, talkin, undead teenage queen


Any mix/performance feedback is greatly appreciated.

Thanks.
Greg
 
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Here I am ....... choosing this as the song a month that I find time to listen to and I get: "Sorry ..... page not found"

You tease!
 
The lyrics don't sound that stupid to me. I mean they aren't any poetice masterpiece but what the hell.

Couldn't listen ... the link doesn't work for me either.

tom
 
I keep getting 'Error on Page' but it's prolly this work computer...

I'll try when I get home...

Love the lyrics tho :D

Are you still using those B8's?

:D
 
Love that groovey trem-a lo-o-o-o in the intro...
Great, great lyrics!!! Love the humor.
Guitar Solo is smokin'!!
Evreything sounds great listening at work on my PC, wanna check it out when I get home on a better system...
 
BentRabbit said:
I keep getting 'Error on Page' but it's prolly this work computer...

I'll try when I get home...

Love the lyrics tho :D

Are you still using those B8's?

:D
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Hell yeah. My B8's rule! :D

queepy said:
Love that groovey trem-a lo-o-o-o in the intro...
Great, great lyrics!!! Love the humor.
Guitar Solo is smokin'!!
Evreything sounds great listening at work on my PC, wanna check it out when I get home on a better system...
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Thanks man. :)
 
Sounds hot. My only criticism is that, technically, the Undead don't want your soul, they want to eat your brain.
 
XLR said:
Sounds hot. My only criticism is that, technically, the Undead don't want your soul, they want to eat your brain.
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Good point. This is why I hate lyrics. Thanks for listening. :D
 
Ultra-Hip-Daddy-O guitar solo...

I have nothing negative to say. Mix sounds *very* balanced. Drums sound awesome. Something about the cymbals...can't quite put my finger on it. Bass and Kick are tight...

hot stuff greg...good job.

Undead Cholo
 
Hey Greg, I love this tune!
Nice job on the visual images that come with listening to the tune. :)

You always come up with stuff that's out of the ordinary, I love that kind of stuff!

Keep it up man!
 
You psycho you. :)

The song is hip. Those crashin' waves (with guitars) sound really cool. The whole surf sound is really cool. Oh the playing is very tight and nice. The solo is smokin' indeed.

Lyrics? Don't worry, sometimes lyrics are only there so the song doesn't sound empty.

:D.

Playing is great as usual. The drums sounds real cool. The mix sounds find. Sounds very complete.
 
You're out of control Greg_L - we've unleashed a music machine. :D

Your writing is great....cool lyrics and arrangement here..... Reminds me of Carrie of course but much creepier.....kissing dead girls!

You've been able to transfer the quality of your covers to your original tunes, both recording and mixing.
 
elcholo said:
Ultra-Hip-Daddy-O guitar solo...

I have nothing negative to say. Mix sounds *very* balanced. Drums sound awesome. Something about the cymbals...can't quite put my finger on it. Bass and Kick are tight...

hot stuff greg...good job.

Undead Cholo
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Thanks for listening and the feedback. :)

EL34 said:
Hey Greg, I love this tune!
Nice job on the visual images that come with listening to the tune. :)

You always come up with stuff that's out of the ordinary, I love that kind of stuff!

Keep it up man!
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Thanks a lot bro. :)

bigbubba said:
You psycho you. :)

The song is hip. Those crashin' waves (with guitars) sound really cool. The whole surf sound is really cool. Oh the playing is very tight and nice. The solo is smokin' indeed.

Lyrics? Don't worry, sometimes lyrics are only there so the song doesn't sound empty.

:D.

Playing is great as usual. The drums sounds real cool. The mix sounds find. Sounds very complete.
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Thanks a lot. :)

ido1957 said:
You're out of control Greg_L - we've unleashed a music machine. :D

Your writing is great....cool lyrics and arrangement here..... Reminds me of Carrie of course but much creepier.....kissing dead girls!

You've been able to transfer the quality of your covers to your original tunes, both recording and mixing.
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Thanks Ido, I really appreciate it. :)
 
Why the down pout about the lyrics?
The lyrics fit the genre - tell a ghoulish, funny story that has redemption (well mutual satisfaction) at the end. ANDDDDD they're COOL!
Musically - GREG, didn't you grumble long & hard about
NOT BEING ABLE TO WRITE SONGS?
Just a dirt hold out weren't ya!
This is a classic, put in some scratches, pops, hiss and a little less finess & I'd swear it was a long lost classic.
TOP SHELF.
 
rayc said:
Why the down pout about the lyrics?
The lyrics fit the genre - tell a ghoulish, funny story that has redemption (well mutual satisfaction) at the end. ANDDDDD they're COOL!
Musically - GREG, didn't you grumble long & hard about
NOT BEING ABLE TO WRITE SONGS?
Just a dirt hold out weren't ya!
This is a classic, put in some scratches, pops, hiss and a little less finess & I'd swear it was a long lost classic.
TOP SHELF.
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Thanks a lot Ray. I guess I held out a little, but it's a confidence thing. I'm getting a little more confident. Hopefully I can keep turning out stuff that I'm happy with.
 
You've inspired my unclean side Greg...

My love life was dead, goin' no where,
Couldn't get me a chick let alone cool hair
All through highschool I was a bit of a loner,
But now I've got me a girl & she gives me a boner.

If a little necrofeelup's your thing,
Try gettin' tongue to tongue with an undead one,
Cold heart, cold hands really get to my glans,
Used to creep me out now I'm a dead set fan.
 
rayc said:
You've inspired my unclean side Greg...

My love life was dead, goin' no where,
Couldn't get me a chick let alone cool hair
All through highschool I was a bit of a loner,
But now I've got me a girl & she gives me a boner.

If a little necrofeelup's your thing,
Try gettin' tongue to tongue with an undead one,
Cold heart, cold hands really get to my glans,
Used to creep me out now I'm a dead set fan.
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Yeah thats pretty unclean. I love it! :D
 
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