Phrasemaker
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A little progress(advice welcome)
Hi Folks,
I'm working on this track in a lyrical sense as well as its composition, so pretty much everything is move-able, adjustable. No title yet, but a few lines of lyrics and I'm not sure about a chorus but may have a bridge section with an alternative phrasing. At this stage I'm basically after any ideas in all respects, as I worked on this for a few hours solid and need to let it rest while I consider the options. I do have a whole track, but have posted a section containing my very rough initial draft tracks which are untidy. I already know the vocals are a tad pitchy, but the track below is playable and not totally crap, when I say rough, I mean not mixed or treated, simply how it currently sits on the tracker after doing the initial takes to get the track in its initial form as opposed to being a set of ideas.
My main question, hence posting here is the structure, I don't know whether to vary it some more by adding additional passages which differ to what's already there, or have a distinct chorus sung over the sections after the long vocal notes after the verses? Come to that, should I just bin the whole thing? Mmmm ponder, ponder, ponder.
OK decided against binning the track, added a guitar solo and still pondering another verse or two, plus whether to change up the vocal approaching the end to a more chant like phrasing which will be sung over the evolving chord harmonies and throw in a kitchen sink or two to build the track even more as it reaches the end?
I have re mixed it a little and cleaned it up a touch, but still in its raw form so maybe not balanced right thus far. I left the initial text on this thread, as it's already been read, plus I want to leave the evidence of my altering thoughts on this in place just in case I go to the bin route again, so at least I can remind myself I gave the track a chance or two. I replaced the original track with the full length version.
Many thanks
Tim
Hi Folks,
I'm working on this track in a lyrical sense as well as its composition, so pretty much everything is move-able, adjustable. No title yet, but a few lines of lyrics and I'm not sure about a chorus but may have a bridge section with an alternative phrasing. At this stage I'm basically after any ideas in all respects, as I worked on this for a few hours solid and need to let it rest while I consider the options. I do have a whole track, but have posted a section containing my very rough initial draft tracks which are untidy. I already know the vocals are a tad pitchy, but the track below is playable and not totally crap, when I say rough, I mean not mixed or treated, simply how it currently sits on the tracker after doing the initial takes to get the track in its initial form as opposed to being a set of ideas.
My main question, hence posting here is the structure, I don't know whether to vary it some more by adding additional passages which differ to what's already there, or have a distinct chorus sung over the sections after the long vocal notes after the verses? Come to that, should I just bin the whole thing? Mmmm ponder, ponder, ponder.
OK decided against binning the track, added a guitar solo and still pondering another verse or two, plus whether to change up the vocal approaching the end to a more chant like phrasing which will be sung over the evolving chord harmonies and throw in a kitchen sink or two to build the track even more as it reaches the end?
I have re mixed it a little and cleaned it up a touch, but still in its raw form so maybe not balanced right thus far. I left the initial text on this thread, as it's already been read, plus I want to leave the evidence of my altering thoughts on this in place just in case I go to the bin route again, so at least I can remind myself I gave the track a chance or two. I replaced the original track with the full length version.
Many thanks
Tim
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