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rol123
New member
Still Need to add electric guitar to the end of the song.
Any sincere feedback is appreciated.
thanks
Any sincere feedback is appreciated.
thanks
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Crazy Luke
New member
Good ethereal song. Very "Jethro Tull"ish. Some of the synth parts in the beginning of the song are masking the vocals, but are ok at 2:30 on. The intermittent lead vocal double is a cool idea, but imo, should not be panned hard L/R. Either keep both in the center, or 3 vocals - strong C, light L/R.
Also, the lead vocal drop in volume at the end, is that making room for the lead guitar?
Good tune.
Also, the lead vocal drop in volume at the end, is that making room for the lead guitar?
Good tune.
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RFR
Well-known member
I like this song a lot.
Here are my general observations after one listen.
Vocal could use some compression and/or automation. The level and presence in the tune goes up and down.
I like the bknd talk-back but sometimes it distracts. Just a bit.
The acoustic gtr could use a bit more. Body and warmth.
Drums are pretty good but the snare is a bit too much snare. What I mean is, it sounds too much bottom snares and too little head.
All minor nits, still like the tune a lot.
Here are my general observations after one listen.
Vocal could use some compression and/or automation. The level and presence in the tune goes up and down.
I like the bknd talk-back but sometimes it distracts. Just a bit.
The acoustic gtr could use a bit more. Body and warmth.
Drums are pretty good but the snare is a bit too much snare. What I mean is, it sounds too much bottom snares and too little head.
All minor nits, still like the tune a lot.
Bruthish
Hair Metal Roxx!
Nice control on the vocals. Really dig the song...I agree on the snare comment, maybe a little more head sound. Great job