Hiya Liam. Were you sitting on a rocking chair or something? There's a funny creaking noise in the background

(I don't mean the fret squeaks).
Won't comment on the recording and mixing, but some other comments.
The song might be OK, there are some nice guitar ideas in it, it needs honing down quite a bit, and IMHO some kind of refrain or chorus would offer scope for a little hook and give it some more forward motion. But it's hard to get to it because your vocal delivery has no confidence whatsoever. I suspect there is a nice voice in there somewhere, but you need to develop your phrasing and intonation. You are not hitting the notes cleanly, so it's hard to hear what you are doing, and there are some major wobbles on the longer notes.
Please don't be offended by my suggesting you take a few singing lessons - most serious singers do and it will make a great deal of difference to your delivery. (My partner's singing is about the only thing that ever gets praised from the stuff I post on this board and she regards lessons as essential.)
Anyway, good start, good potential, lots of work to do (like the rest of us

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Where in Ireland are you? My own first ever song (which is now permanently erased from our memories!) was "premiered" in a pub in Kilkenny in 1999.