Simple Twist of Fate - 30 Second Clip

[oneguy]

Hey Y'all!

It has been away since I last posted.

I've still been playing around with stuff and learning things.

Let me know what you think of my latest clip.

Thanks in advance!

Oneguy

 

[aaronmcoleman]

is there any bass?

Guitar sounds thin and boring, the tone could use a little chime, or be just on the verge of breaking up.

Drums are simple and could work.

Biggest thing for me is lack of bass, and out of pitch vocals. I think being honest is the best way to get better. Keep plugging away and your recordings and performance will get better and better.

 

[oneguy]

I appreciate the honest feedback. Actually after listening to it a few more times I think there was something going on with my electric guitar.

I decided to do an acoustic one instead. Please let me know your comments on this newer one and ignore the above clip.

Thanks!

It's in the post below.

 

[oneguy]

Any opinions? YouTube - ‪Simple Twist v2‬‏