Silver Spoons

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bigwillz24

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Hey fellas check out this song and tell me what you think.

www.mysapce.com/divercity07

Holla

Will

Before this is seen as a double post this is for the guys that never come out of the hip hop forum...
 
I would peep it but can't listen to myspace sites at work...
 
overal clean, concept dope... i think the hooks melody (the singing) could be tightend up a lil more, i'd hit it wit a few different EQ's prolly, and find a way to create more change up in the beat. lyrically on point. even performance wise. otherwise yea good ish, id deffinetly knock it again.
 
Hey - Now That Is Tite!! The Musicality Of It Is Hot - The Bass Line Is Righteous. I Gotta Agree Though With The Singing - Needs . . . A Better Voice Or Some Stronger Eq-in . . .

The Got Damm Flow Is Tight!! - Too Fast For Me (l0l) But Its Right.

The Bass Line Kinda Sounds A Little On The Verge Of Some Distortion, But That Could Just Be My System . . . ??
 
dope beat wow...i really like it..probably one of the first tracks on this forum where i was really feeling the beat as much as i did on this...flow of the track is nice but the hook sounds like it does need some work with the eq and shit but its just a minor tweak.... its a banger kid..
 
Thanks for all the compliments! :) I'll be working on the hook a little more tomorrow.
 
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