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Sir,
this is absolute garbage,a real anti-climax.
the production is rubbish,the arrangement is sloppy and tedious.
I will leave the rest of my critique to your imagination...
here at Mystery Records quality control is of the essence.as you become more mature you will understand this.As for now,unplug your gear and take up a new hobby,something that better suits your needs such as, but not limited to:
horse wrangling
ball worship
shining my client,the extraordinary Christian's shoes
cement worker

you get the drift,now buzz off.
Ted Philips/Mystery Records
 
As Big fan of Prog.

I have to say great work.

I love the intro, it has a great warmth, and then you go over to a Pink floydish "in the flesh" frensy for a moment.
Classic. :cool:

I like your style and the raw sounds on this stuff man. :cool:

Dont mind the Bug who wrote before me, I think his words describes his knowlegde of music, wich equals :confused: :confused: :confused: :D


I think your on to something here, work with it post the results.

thanks for sharing
 
Nice work in progress. Ya, the beginning is a bit slow but this would be a good interlude if you keep it short. It seems to be missing the bottom end however.
 
It would appear that someone is either jaded or just using posts as an opportunity to plug a mystery business. Either way they offer nothing constructive so IGNORE. As we say down here "I'd rather be dead than Ted"
The intro is too long unless you add a REALLY rivetting solo over the top.
I like the rest as a bed for something to grow from. Nice jarring chords & nagging noodles.
Keep at it & post as you go.
 
hey thanks guys ! this song has been concieved and recorded in one day and mixed the next day so i suppose yes, there still is a lot to be done.

morningstar : do you mean there's no bottom end in the intro or the song?

nakatira : prog! now you mentione them ... ;)

rayc : i find ted's comments rather funny actualy! one of the better throlls. :rolleyes:
 
I like this alot. Has sort of a Amon Duel krautrock feel with the choices you made in keyboard and guitar tones.

I'm sure it will get even better once you develop the idea some more.
 
faderbug said:
morningstar : do you mean there's no bottom end in the intro or the song?
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Both but it is really evident when the instruments come in at 1:07, 2:05 and 2:49. It sounds like you ran it through a high pass filter.
 
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