Shine On Me

jonlint

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Had a little writers block the last few months - that came to a crashing end - here's "Shine On Me" - feedback most welcome.

Shine On Me by Jonathan Linton 4 | Free Listening on SoundCloud

LYRICS:
(Words by Jonathan Linton, Music by Jonathan Linton)

You were a friend
Then you throw me in
The deep end
Drowning inside my skin
I’m sinking down
And live’s cavin’ in
Throw me a lifeline!

Got thrown a rope
I’m at the end of it
Despair and doom
Live’s a blend of it
Watch my wits end
Swiftly flee
Waitin’ for luck
To shine on me
Shine on me
Shine on me
Shine on me
Shine on me
Shine!

A living ghost
In my empty hole
A poison dose
My only daily goal
A million posts
That my live’s grandiose
Throw me a lifeline!

Got thrown a rope
I’m at the end of it
Despair and doom
Live’s a blend of it
Watch my wits end
Swiftly flee
Waitin’ for luck
To shine on me
Shine on me
Shine on me
Shine on me
Shine on me
Shine!

SOLO

Got thrown a rope
I’m at the end of it
Despair and doom
Live’s a blend of it
Watch my wits end
Swiftly flee
Waitin’ for luck
To shine on me
Shine on me
Shine on me
Shine on me
Shine on me...
 

Irwin abrigo

New member
You were a friend
Then you throw me in
The deep end
Drowning inside my skin
I’m sinking down
And live’s cavin’ in
Throw me a lifeline!

A living ghost
In my empty hole
A poison dose
My only daily goal
A million posts
That my live’s grandiose
Throw me a lifeline!

Nice written words in those two verses above jonlint, I am not a fan of the chorus that much but the music it sounds good to my ears.

Irwin
 
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