she wouldn't take my picture

[Manslick]

she had a camera
in her hand
so why
right

i am right there
right wrist on the jamb
locks flowing
best face ever

me not her then nothing
she has this rule
no looking good
if you are drunk

so i am sunk
right off the bat
what a ask right
why such grit

 

[Manslick]

woops me prolly should up some music.
lem me see what i got
some blues, ok i be back
...
hmm ok
this follows a thing i was thinking the other day
finish the song before you fling it

wut, you, oh, now you see what i cando
i can spell wrong
i can spell your lips in detail
i will well be looking

soon the stink of you will be a tattoo in my head
oh what a smell.
soon the din of me will be in the sea
and all the fish are smiling

 

[Manslick]

ok well this is it

 

[Manslick]

ok well i have heard better songs
and but it certainly is engaging

 

[Manslick]

Im sitting down here all high fivin me like a fool
and all the other ones of me are too
mostly the strong ones
the ones with the look

 

[Manslick]

good times buhs
good to see yall again
where you been
me too

 

[Manslick]

i know right
man back in the day
but now aint bad either right
fuck in a

 

[Manslick]

i got to go
she won't critique me
so i'm nothing
again

 

[Manslick]

i can feel them tapping into me
a subtle low electric
warm like
sleepy time

 

[Manslick]

she will not critique me.

 

[HumanPlanet]

ok well this is it

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She might

 

[HumanPlanet]

have a

 

[HumanPlanet]

point...

 

[HumanPlanet]

?

 

[Manslick]

all good up in here

 

[Irwin abrigo]

What is going on with the comments under this post, I just don't understand.

 

[Manslick]

What is going on with the comments under this post, I just don't understand.

People talking to themselves or padding their post count.