Second song, can I get some feedback?

[calltheriot]

Hej guys, here's a second song i've been working on. Can i get some feedback on this one?

 

[sammydix]

Is the scratchy fizz on purpose? I'm genuinely asking because I've found some ppl like that, so it could really be a preference. The song itself sounds cool to me, but it was hard for me (personally) to get past those guitars...


...but my ears feel scraped clean.