Sands of Time

jonlint

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Hi all,

This is an older with retracked vocals and solo with a remix. Kemper released some awesome ambient delays last year which inspired me to write this. Feedback most welcome:

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SANDS OF TIME
(Words by Jonathan Linton, Music by Jonathan Linton)

Mountain to climb
And running out of time
Final countdown
Lollygagged around
Only you’re to blame
For what you became
Apathetic soul
Loosing control

A steep cliff, for you to climb
But it’s running, slipping
Through your hands
The sands of time
The sands of time

Take self-control
Come out your foxhole
Stitch in time
Can save you nine
Break from the chains
And stop with the blame
Apathetic soul
Take self-control

A steep cliff, for you to climb
But it’s running, slipping
Through your hands
The sands of time
The sands of time

SOLO

A steep cliff, for you to climb
But it’s running, slipping
Through your hands
The sands of time
A steep cliff, for you to climb
But it’s running, slipping
Through your hands
The sands of time
The sands of time
 
Jonlint , Very nice guitar tone and delay. "Powerful" vocals and spot on harmony. I really enjoyed this one Great job .. mark
 

DM60

Well-known member
OK, first, good tune. It seems to have some mud, I think you could clean that area up with some simple EQ and this thing rocks!

Don't touch anything else, just do some cutting on the final 200-300 range. Everything else sounded really great!
 
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