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[Skyscraper]

Recorded this on ProTools 8 le any feedback or tips that will help me out would be greatly appreciated

https://soundcloud.com/dannydade-305/hunnit-bandz-danny-dade

Thanks in advance and if anyone wants to collab Im more than down I have a bunch of local artist that I work with.

 

[mjbphotos]

Try the MP3 Clinic section of these forums.