REQ : Feedback on a home mastering

[k12]

Hey everybody !
As the topic says, I would like to get some feedback about the last master I've done for a remix contest.
Any improvements suggestions are more than welcome

https://soundcloud.com/k12/loadstar-dr-karg-k12-remix

 

[mjbphotos]

The MP3 Clinic part of this forum is where you want to post this.