Unfortunately, my first impression is HUGE hiss, but that's a niggle.
My second impression, however, is a dark, Louisiana night with a big ol' batch of crawdads, a sweaty t-shirt, a six-pack of Dixie Blackened Voodoo Lager, and a scantily clad, slightly-skanky-in-a-good-way brunette in my lap.
That's probably not what you were going for, but it definitely took me somewhere. I like that.
I immensely enjoyed this song, and this is absolutely not my style of music. I love it when that happens.
Between you and Geezer with his little jazz ditty, I've decided not to kill myself tonight! Is that the ultimate kudo, or what?
J/k
You have a great voice. Or whoever. Seriously. Great voice. Great lyrics. Great guitar. Nice drums. Great. Great. Great. Did I say...? Well, you get the picture.
The only fault I find is the hiss, and that could be due to almost anything. Otherwise, this is a perfect song. I'd give my left, right and middle nuts to write something this goddamn cool. Thanks for sharing. I'm gonna crack open a beer now... and see what I can do for this brunette on my lap. Mmmmmm.