Just a couple comments. First, nice job on the track. It rocks along well. Drums sound great too. My one niggle is the verb you used on the vocal. Something about it is fighting with the quality of the vocal track itself--maybe too much, maybe just the wrong patch. If the vocal sound was killer, it would raise the quality of the track, which is already good.
Please do respond to others tracks. If you don't feel comfortable offering specific advice, just comment on the tunes and on what you hear. It also opens up the door to ask questions''"what mic did you use on that vocal, what effect, what technique, etc" We all have a lot to teach each other. This forum is incredibly unique in that it allws you to hear what other are doing and to find out how they did it. I learn something every time I hear somebodys work and I have been recording in one way or another for 35 years!
Oh, and keep up the good work! If your new to recording, you are way ahead of the class...