rayc
retroreprobate
Cool solo - i'd have liked a slightly diff tag end to it but it still works very well.
I like the spoken outro.
Excellent.
I like the spoken outro.
Excellent.
WhiteStrat
Don't stare at the eye.
As always, I'm late to the party. Just want to say: Damn! I love it!
What a cool sound you've created--everything about it works for me!
What a cool sound you've created--everything about it works for me!
msb3671
Cheeto Lover
Cool tune. I liked the creepy fun vocals. Ompalooma-ish somehow. 
Mix was good for me, but maybe more drums up front, with all the starts and stops it may define them more.
Nice job dude.
Matty
Mix was good for me, but maybe more drums up front, with all the starts and stops it may define them more.
Nice job dude.
Matty
queepy
aka Variaxman
Such a groovy tune, Queep, I just love that chorus. And the guitar solo fits it like a glove....
Can you post the lyrics, they're really freaky.
Great original stuff!
Thanks Joey, glad ya liked it! Here is the lyrics:
Sprite
So many hills to climb
So many thing to say
To hope one simple rhyme
Can capture the day
Flitting here to there
They’re so fast to see
Like minnows in a stream
On the edges of a dream
If you follow the sun
There’s a forested glen
Where memories don't stay
Where stain is washed away
You won't know who you are
Or remember where you've been
All you do is forget
All the lies you've been fed
Chorus:
Pan says you're not welcome
You know its time to leave
Paint the colors by number
Paint the color on the trees
Pan says you're not welcome
You know its time to leave
Paint the colors by number
Paint the color on the trees
Following the trail
You may just get back home
You may wander forever
Bathed in earthen tones
I won't be far behind
To catch you if you fall
Wishing you a winter's rest
Wishing you the very best
Can you come on down
We’re lonely way down here
Cop a squat
Look around
Tell me what you found
Lovely bird on a fence
Tell me what you found
Sing a Song of sixpence
Tell us what you found
Chorus
Guitar solo
Chorus
You chase her down the hill
She’s just out of your reach
Hoping you can catch her
You step into the breech
Wings like hummingbirds
She can walk on the air
There’s a time before time
And she can lead you there
She flits around your head
There’s nothing you can do
Things that have been said
Lying amongst the honey dew
Lovely bird on a fence
Tell me what you found
Sing a Song of sixpence
Tell us what you found
Chorus
queepy
aka Variaxman
rayc : cool solo - i'd have liked a slightly diff tag end to it but it still works very well.
I like the spoken outro.
Excellent.
Thanks Ray, I probably could take the last part of the solo into a higher register rather then just repeating the same lick....interesting idea I think i will try next time I can sneak off to my studio
......Thanks for listening again, appreciate it!
Hey, thanks a lot WhiteStrat...glad ya dug it! Thanks for listening!
Ompaloomaish...ha! I love that! i have been obsessed with cutting mids from my mixes lately in order to get a less muddy sound....think I may have gone a little to far as it does sound a little punch-less to me...I plan on working on the drums and the guitar sound as well, which I would like a little heavier/crunchier during the chorus's...
Thanks for your comments, I appreciate the feedback!
I like the spoken outro.
Excellent.
Thanks Ray, I probably could take the last part of the solo into a higher register rather then just repeating the same lick....interesting idea I think i will try next time I can sneak off to my studio
......Thanks for listening again, appreciate it!Hey, thanks a lot WhiteStrat...glad ya dug it! Thanks for listening!
Ompaloomaish...ha! I love that! i have been obsessed with cutting mids from my mixes lately in order to get a less muddy sound....think I may have gone a little to far as it does sound a little punch-less to me...I plan on working on the drums and the guitar sound as well, which I would like a little heavier/crunchier during the chorus's...
Thanks for your comments, I appreciate the feedback!
