Psychedelic Mastering - Input?

[Mountainmirrors]

Greetings-
I just tried some new mastering tweaks on my tune "Field of Grass". It's a Zeppelin-esque ethereal guitar rock song which I recorded with Cool Edit. Download it at http://www.ampcast.com/mountain_mirrors .
I appreciate your input on the mix, performance, mastering and overall vibes, as it's my first attempt at DIY mastering.
Gratefully,
Jeff Sanders

 

[Track Rat]

Definately Zep-esque Down to the lead down. Very cool. Only minor quibbles with your tune. Spots between verses where it's drums and bass, there's just too much of it (space between the verses). Just my humble opinion mind you. I think I might have got a little more aggressive with panning tricks or ping ponging type delays on the leads ala Hole Lotta Love. These are VERY fine points as this a damn fine tune just the way it sits.

 

[chessrock]

Vocals are too loud.

It also sounds a little bare . . . could use some more instruments.

You should take this to the MP3 clinic, by the way. I think you'll have a little more luck there.