Prodigal son - My new song. Critique?

[rilez]

I just finished up this one and I really like it. Can you wonderful people of homerecording give a technical critique? That would be awesome.
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Thanks!!!

 

[rilez]

Seriously? Somebody?

 

[Tobe]

Nice vocal sound... it should be in a teen movie, which is all good. But on a broader level the song is a bit turgid and ponderous.

 

[rilez]

It is a little distended, but I was kind of going for that.