Poppy Kind of song "Answer your Phone"

[seansigep]

Check it out and let me know what you think. I think the vocals might be a bit loud, and they are a bit flat as well, but its better than no vocals. Made this in about 3 hours, so hit me with your best shot. Lyrics are a direct rip-off of some song by SugarRay I have never heard. I seriously googled some lyrics just to put them in there, and I am writing the lyrics as we speak (or you listen).

Sean

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=331646

 

[Monkey Allen]

Sounds fine to me. What's the little synth sounding beeping riff?

 

[seansigep]

Thats all i get? 1 response?

 

[donger]

Its kindof funny listening to this song because i used to be a big sugar ray fan.

It all sounds good except for the reverb on the vox is very distracting for some reason.

 

[Seeker of Rock]

sssssss......syphillis, oops sorry, I meant, sibilance, sibilance on the vocals, man. Pull down the ultra high frequencies on the vocs. Nice tune, btw.

 

[ido1957]

What Seeker and Donger said.

Nice backing tracks tho....and you're not that flat - I'm pretty flat on my best day Vox are a bit high maybe and could use some compression.....

Wild effect on the end (Whammy + Wah?) Cool...

 

[gtr_guy26]

I think it sounds good the mix is about right the vocals are ok and it is a lil hard to be non biased being that the lyrics don't go with that song. But the music is cool I like it. I think the style of singing doesn't fit.