"Poetry Club"

There's too many mc's struggling,
do you maybe believe they dont have the talent to succeed?
too many mc's seem troubling,
maybe cus they spend all they money of hoes and weed?
i can't really tell, but theres about nundred thousands and eighty mill,
these people playing the field of wanting to be a rap star but no skill,
i'm constantly seeing young minorities gettin blamed for what they did not do,
all these brutal supremacy made just to fuck you,
how can these kids be inspired by guns money and drugs,
guns will kill, money is evil, and drugs will give you fake love,
i cant understand the whole situation we are in,
so much drama, my mama fuckin named me sin,
.........DAMN........

random thoughts...

peace

aziaddict
 
Abyyss said:
Maybe it'd be cool if we like started posting proper poetry here as well as rhymes - maybe some cats'd be comfortable wit that?
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I say start a new thead for the poetry keep one poetry and one rhymes this here is the shit. ihave never seen a thread lite up this quick with it being a controversial topic hella good job abyss
 
soundboy said:
I say start a new thead for the poetry keep one poetry and one rhymes this here is the shit. ihave never seen a thread lite up this quick with it being a controversial topic hella good job abyss
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I might do that - I'll let this thread grow for a bit first.

Hopefully this thread'll be around for a long time.
 
yeah

name the other one HELL'S KITCHEN, but then again i know what you are really after abyyss. wink, wink
 
ok

you are after the hottest thread on homerecording. i think i hit the nail. you masterminded this whole thing. good job.
 
Now I understand the "HELL'S KITCHEN" joke. :D

Ah, maybe it should be that if anyone wants to post in the hip-hop forum they have to post here.......

Haha! The forum belongs to me!!!

Really though - I just wanted to kick some rhymes.

Of course - it's success isn't a bad thing :D
 
i speak with boast
my dead homies get a frequent toast
am i a dead man walkin
the streets with ghosts?
that's what i ask myself
but i don't need liquer
or tobacco to relax myself
but i do drink a little
when my thoughts are clouded
so i guess i'm a drinker
i never really thought about it
i'm as guilty as a smoker
at least that's how the judge feels
because second hand smoke
from the mic does kill
i rock these bars however you want it
16, 32, 64, i'm all on it
keep your disrespect kidco
cause i'm not having that
you better stop me
cause i'll rock till spinstewun
decides to bring dragon back
 
yeah

hell's kitchen had a double meaning this is where all the heat is. people are after each others throats in here. ya'll keep up the good work.
 
alright, alright, alright, alright, alright

feel free to jump in, everyone does
i'm just warming up, abyss is done
u said it yourself; cool, you have things to do
nobody would want to log on and just get bruised
you're abused, a fool, a joke, a hopeless bloke
a fan, a stan, a beitch, you'll just get smoked
you're still spellin wrong, recognize the medium
your heart ain't big enough, punk, step aside you're medium
ain't nobody ridin witcha, you're probably walkin
we all saw your post picture, you're probably stalkin
i got to say it, we might all like eminem
but that there's just a lil....feminine
soundboy called him out, his style's not all his
he kidnapped that ish like elian gonzales
it's on trick, f*** with me and get your mouth swole
i'm out cold, kick ya a** to the south pole
i do this for fun, my job ain't mc
fact is, you're as wack as panjabi mc
the drama is deep - and i just don't like you
i'll bomb on you and 10 dudes like you from your high school
your words come hard, perhaps you'll think twice
it sounds a lil funny coming from the one who wanted advice
here's a tip: take your a** home
I slap beitches like deebo, you lost on friday homes
and this is my day bro, you should give up on ya flow
you started this thread but i brought fire to the posts
everybody knows - l.jamaar is absurd
your luck's out, you struck out when i threw that curve
i'll toss a pitch like pedro martinez
don't cross the border like kids named dominguez
and i mean this - like i said it before
don't never, ever, ever, ever come around here no more

pt.II, coming soon...
 
part 2, for you know who

i'll blaze on you son, or better yet boy
that's all the skills you got? you better get more
you should...wake up, wake up, wake up, wake up
you raps...they suck, they suck, they suck, they suck
you heard that old school ish, now you're smiling
that's the type of dope skill that i bring
why are you lying? we're not buying
you're not a rapper, Mufuka stop trying
you know it's coming, you knew i would do ya
go back to bitchin about ya lil ashy computer
jump in the ring, real mc's will bruise ya
ya mama came thru but she ain't act like she knew ya
bury that keyboard, where it can't be found, boy
you're alone in the dark, what's that sound, boy?
you're not an artist - get back on that sound board
check, one....two - how does that sound, boy?
you can't battle me? and i'm not an MC?
take ya fake detroit ass back to 9mile and evergreen
you live in beech woods, but you speak hood
these folks aint up on it, but i can tell that you're weak blood
though my lungs are cold, my heartbeats pump lava
i'll drag ya a** through the river from windsor to hart plaza
you're a sucker who thinks beef only comes on a platter
yeah, you must be mad - go back to wonderland, hatter
you don't belong in a rap thread, coming with wackness
i'll finish 2 cats from the UK with this:
i don't care 'bout where you're from, or where i'm reppin
the bottom line is: you both ain't ready to test this
now what sound? I ain't got time for clowns
now what 'byss? I ain't got time for this
one challenger's not a battler, his mic is a toy
and the other one.............what happened to that boy?
 
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not my usual style, but..


are you guys serious
these inferior rhymes're makin me grow delirous
I fear we spit so sick
you're rhymes stick like crisco then
on a whim I'll honor them
those who write tight and still deserve honorin


dang I'm rusty..
 
ridl said:
not my usual style, but..


are you guys serious
these inferior rhymes're makin me grow delirous
I fear we spit so sick
you're rhymes stick like crisco then
on a whim I'll honor them
those who write tight and still deserve honorin


dang I'm rusty..
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Well here's the place become un-rusty.

Just keep typin' - no-one'll make fun of u.

U'll get it back again.
 
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