Please review Zeeza..

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Future of Rock

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I'm not looking for a technical review per se but more of an overall and songwriting one, if possible.

Hi Fi

Lo Fi
 
Pleasant voice and good vocal melody in a Devinals sorta way{I like}...weak lyrics {lack focus/too wordie} and weak musical arrangement{The music lays there with no definision}..Needs a rewrite IMHO..tempo needs to be looked at..find the swing of the vocal melody and derive the muscial groove to that..There is no real strong hook because the chour. meanders a bit..Loose the Cute effects in relation to the internet{IMHO} In the larger picture they will come off as "cheap"....All this depends on what you are trying to acheave though..3:20 max you are running long at over 5:00 mins now...Good luck you have the germ of a good song!




Don
 
Future of Rock, I think this song tells a very interesting story. I have always disagreed with the "TIME" limit. 3:20, is that it now? 4/5ths of my songs would be ruled out. Alice's restaurant never would have been listened to, over 18:00 minutes. Anyways....
I thought there was some interesting ideas used in the song.
Like I said earlier, it tells a very interesting story.
Thanks for the listen......... :cool:
 
I was waiting for a change up or break in the song, I gave up after couple of minutes. You have a good voice, but you need to let loose and sing out, at least once in a while. The song has potential, but lacks dynamics and variety. This might sound better with just vocal and acoustic guitar.
 
thanks for the reviews

I was not on the internet when these posts were made. Thanks for the reviews, I'd like some more please.


The Zeeza Love Album "Pearls" contains 52 songs and is a collection of all 4 Zeeza Love CDs. I am now working on some new material. I was off of the internet for over 7 years and just came back to get into the digital thing.
Blessings to all

Zeeza Love:)
 
Uhh... I clicked your link, and there was no song, but there was a link there for a music hosting site, so I clicked that, and listened to this instead. Not bad for an acoustic guitar spanish-sounding song! Guitar was a bit bright, though. Percussion needed to come up, too.

:laughings: :laughings: :laughings: :laughings: :laughings: :drunk:

( :laughings: not to mention that the original is over six years old! :drunk: )
 
time is such an illusion

haha,FT/Z moment. I had an mp3.com moment while seeing archives from the past.


:laughings:
...maybe we can keep this thread going for 15 years.
 
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