Please I Need Some Feedback On This Song

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I might not be the right person to comment, since i'm very open to even the most unorthodox songwriting, and i don't know what you want with your writing - but i think this could be a real nice song. Structurewise, ideaswise, the arrangement, is fine....couldn't make out much of the lyrics, so can't comment on that.... it's certainly worth finishing. Nice one :)



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yeah man thanks for listening yeah the vocals are kinda low but ill try to make it better
thanks
 
If you could post it in the Song writing part please then you would get better reponse since you are asking for song writing critique.
 
Hey this is interesting. Very lo-fi, like you were using a Radio Shack computer mic that's getting bumped around occasionally, but listening past that... (and past the guitar tuning) The song's very good. So is the performance - I mean, this sounds like first take unedited stuff. Imagining how it'd sound with better gear and more polished takes.

What I like the most is the layered acoustic guitars (sounds like both a steel str and nylon were used), which takes a bit of arranging skill to put them together this way. But make sure the guitars stay in tune.

Tim
 
yeah its a very bad mic, thanks for listening and telling me what u think,
thanks
 
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