Please critique this guitar rock opus (?)

zim

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Hi all,

I've just recently finished my first song in over a year--I needed to work on "the mix", and I hope I've gotten a little better.

Here is the link; all comments are so truly appreciated. The song is the first one, titled "? (Untitled no.1)".

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/zim_music.htm

Please let me know what I could do to improve the sound/mix/etc.--anything
 
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