Please critique my song

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I love it. I love the choice of sounds, lyrics, and arrangement. Vocals can maybe come up a bit, but it's not that bad, they're not buried or anything, I just would like to hear them a bit more. I'd love to hear this tune with real drums and maybe louder and/or ballsier guitars, but that's all personal preference. Overall great song, kind of tune I wish I wrote.
 
Nice tune!

Drums sound too thin and weak. This track needs a Sabbathy, Bonham punch to the drum tracks unless you're going for that *artificial* sound(?) The bass I can't hear the bass at all which can help emphasize the *missing* bass drum. Everything sounds pretty tits to me!

Good job jpdubay!
 
the_philth said:
Everything sounds pretty tits to me!

Good job jpdubay!
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Hehe...Don't those 2 statements contradict each other? :D :D :D

Unless "tits" is good..Wait, what the hell am I talking about? Of course "tits" is good!!!
 
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Thanks for the tips- I am going to rerecord the guits to beef them up. As far as the drums, I kind of want an artificial sound because I don't have acoustic drums to record and don't want to try in vain to make samples sound real. I guess I'll just have to play with the eq a bit more, because I agree they sound thin.
 
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