Please be honest

[lurgan liar]

OK i have updated the links

Instrumental Song

Choose "Mix 2" - its the second attempt at this instrumental song i made

It needs lyrics...If anyone cares to add lyrics be my guest ....i can't sing

Any one care to give me advice

 

[junplugged]

lots of reverb, drums in the distance, but ok, you are a guitar player. Calm mood, shaker sounds mechanical, where's your big giant echo'd solo?

Ok, there it is.

 

[lurgan liar]

reverb

hey you're right...i am a guitar player....the drums were done on my keyboard....so there's not much i could do about them sounding mechanical...

i did the organ and bass myself as well....so i wasn't expecting miracles ...

and yeah i think i do tend to over use the reverb

 

[Supercreep]

I think the song would be better served without the drums. Perhaps only some malleted cymbals and an occasional drenched tambourine hit.

 

[XLR]

I like everything about the piece except the bass. It's out of tune almost all the time and it gets in the way of the drums during the first couple of minutes. The contrast in instrumentation at 2:00 is very effective. Good guitar there.

Tim

 

[lurgan liar]

Yeah you're right the bass is sharp....need to re track that ....shouldn't be a prob....and lower the volume ...cheers for the feedback tim

and the drums need done again anyway ....i'll probably get my drummer to actually do them this time ...instead of using my keyboard to do them lol

 

[bsanfordnyc]

turn down the volume on those hihats

they are the loudest thing on the track

the guitar solo is also too loud

like the tune though

 

[lurgan liar]

Excellent i love the feedback on this forum....

after listening to the track again a few times ...i agree the hi hat is too dominant ......but i'll get my drummer to record the drums with his kit and hopefully should get a more live realistic sound (overused the reverb)........and i'll do the bass again tomorrow

oh and turn the solo down a bit...