Play Me A Country Song

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Irwin abrigo

Irwin abrigo

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Hi everyone,

Please be kind to give me a feedback on this song.

Below is the link:

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=495672



Play Me A Country Song
©2005 Irwin Byron Abrigo

(verse 1)
Had a date the other night with a girl I just met
at a tub down at the country side
they were a few couples out on the dance floor
dancing to music I’d never really like

(Chorus 1)
They didn’t play a country song
I’d wanted to hear a country song
If they would they would have brought the place down
I wish they’d played a country song

(verse 2)
I stood there with my date staring each other in the face
I didn’t know her dos or donts
for a dance I lead the way and I talk to the DJ
I said play me a country song

(Chorus 2)
I wanna to hear a country song
please play me a country song
If you do you’ll bring the house down
wouldn’d you Play me a country song

(verse 3)
We left a little after midnight
and still they didn’t play a country song
I slept with it on my mind the next morning I turn on the radio
they were playing a country song

(Chorus 3)
And they were playing a country song (country song)
and I can hear it all day long (country song)
playing a country song (country song)
oh oh a country song

(verse 4)
My date dropped in at me home later on that evening
I open up the door and I wasn’t believing
she talk about the other night she said she really had a good time
then came a silent she broke down and cry

(Chorus 4)
They didn’t play a country song
she’d wanted to hear a country song
would have brought the whole place down (whole place down)
if they had played a country song

Play A country song (country song)
I wanna hear a country song (country song)
all day all night long (country song)
play me a country song

play me a country song (play me a country song)
would you play me a country song (play me a country song)
all day all night long (play me a country song)
play me a country song


Irwin Abrigo
songwriter
 
Hi, IRWIN

Vox, piano and organ are ok.
The "machine drum Roland type" is the worst thing in this song. Give it a tottaly fake feel, I supose is not what you want.

Adding real drums (or at least a good sample),bass and (real)acoustic and eletric guitars and the song will works IMO

Ciro
 
I think drum machines are something you either love or hate. I think the 808 style cymbals are a little annoying. Piano is very cool though. It may need some kind of obnoxious guitar solo though! Good job Irwin!
 
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