Play Me A Country Song

[Irwin abrigo]

Hi everyone,

Please be kind to give me a feedback on this song.

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Play Me A Country Song
©2005 Irwin Byron Abrigo

(verse 1)
Had a date the other night with a girl I just met
at a tub down at the country side
they were a few couples out on the dance floor
dancing to music I’d never really like

(Chorus 1)
They didn’t play a country song
I’d wanted to hear a country song
If they would they would have brought the place down
I wish they’d played a country song

(verse 2)
I stood there with my date staring each other in the face
I didn’t know her dos or donts
for a dance I lead the way and I talk to the DJ
I said play me a country song

(Chorus 2)
I wanna to hear a country song
please play me a country song
If you do you’ll bring the house down
wouldn’d you Play me a country song

(verse 3)
We left a little after midnight
and still they didn’t play a country song
I slept with it on my mind the next morning I turn on the radio
they were playing a country song

(Chorus 3)
And they were playing a country song (country song)
and I can hear it all day long (country song)
playing a country song (country song)
oh oh a country song

(verse 4)
My date dropped in at me home later on that evening
I open up the door and I wasn’t believing
she talk about the other night she said she really had a good time
then came a silent she broke down and cry

(Chorus 4)
They didn’t play a country song
she’d wanted to hear a country song
would have brought the whole place down (whole place down)
if they had played a country song

Play A country song (country song)
I wanna hear a country song (country song)
all day all night long (country song)
play me a country song

play me a country song (play me a country song)
would you play me a country song (play me a country song)
all day all night long (play me a country song)
play me a country song


Irwin Abrigo
songwriter

 

[CIRO]

Hi, IRWIN

Vox, piano and organ are ok.
The "machine drum Roland type" is the worst thing in this song. Give it a tottaly fake feel, I supose is not what you want.

Adding real drums (or at least a good sample),bass and (real)acoustic and eletric guitars and the song will works IMO

Ciro

 

[TelePaul]

I think drum machines are something you either love or hate. I think the 808 style cymbals are a little annoying. Piano is very cool though. It may need some kind of obnoxious guitar solo though! Good job Irwin!

 

[CIRO]

I think drum machines are something you either love or hate

On a "country song", I hate it!

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[TelePaul]

On a "country song", I hate it!

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This song isn't exactly country though is it? The tempo and Key relationship seems off to me...either it should be upbeat and happy or slow and dark..this seems more upbeat and dark! Just my 2 cents.