Piggy in the Middle (It's the facts of lif) :)

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Oh, what fun. More obscure British-accent rap with meaningless lyrics from Mervyn. Gotta say, at least the audio quality is better than the last one- or at least more consistent. Really, dude, I love seeing your stuff out there, if only because it perplexes me and even makes me smile- but I don't understand a word of it.

Rock on! :D I truly hope it sells like ice in July, so you can afford to kick your ex's arse with a gold-plated boot.
 
Thats better Stevie B benice and not a nasty troll ,Respect dude
 
Double post there, bud. It happens.

Really, I was not trolling* you- if you believe what some others here say, you will likely fall for anything. I don't give a dead rat's ass what those two think. I never pull my punches when I review something- you will get plenty of attaboys, which are useful, but as hard as friendly support is to find, honest opinion- either good or bad- is even more scarce. I don't rap on people for it's own sake, or to inflate my ego.

*From Wikipedia:
In Internet slang, a troll is someone who posts inflammatory, extraneous, or off-topic messages in an online community, such as an online discussion forum, chat room, or blog, with the primary intent of provoking readers into an emotional response or of otherwise disrupting normal on-topic discussion...
 
The vox are really buried in the verses. It also sounds like the vocal track is really messy, like there's a lot of sibilance going on or something.
 
I can't really understand what you're saying and that's crazy because I listen to Death Metal and can understand that shit most of the time. Maybe a little focus on making the vocals much more clear and understandable. Especially if you have a message or something you want to say.
 
Lots of highs and not enough bass. It sounds kinda harsh to me overall. I'm not using my usual monitors right now, so that may be throwing it off...see what others say about that.

Vocals sound like a good track on tape that someone ran over with a steam roller (just guessing because I've never actually heard that before). It sounds like the same steam roller may have gotten to the synth bass track...but that actually sounds cool enough to keep. This is not my genre, I'm not even sure if this is in a genre at all, but I'd like more kick, and a shorter song because it gets kinda repetitive.
 
no genre ,just me original one in a million

genius is ridiculed at first than accepted as the brilliance it is ....................:(
 
my favorite of yours so far..more musical than the last couple I heard.
 
stevieb said:
Oh, what fun. More obscure British-accent rap with meaningless lyrics from Mervyn. Gotta say, at least the audio quality is better than the last one- or at least more consistent. Really, dude, I love seeing your stuff out there, if only because it perplexes me and even makes me smile- but I don't understand a word of it.

Rock on! :D I truly hope it sells like ice in July, so you can afford to kick your ex's arse with a gold-plated boot.
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Stevie help me become a better mixmaster sir !!!!
 
Not sure I would know what to suggest. I'd say by being willing to post your stuff here and listen to critiques is about it.
 
Where did you get the idea for this song? When I saw the thread title, I immediately thought of the Cure's song "Piggy in the Mirror".
 
song ideas just come random to me after i have music to feel i suppose .i kinda juxpost myself with offensive content and melodic music is what am aiming fot
 
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