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jsebastiano
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So this is a song that I've been obsessing over for months... I think I'm finally pretty close... I myself am unsure of the vocal and drum treatment...
ido1957
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Awesome - nice mixture of metal and melody. The mix for me is good - stop obsessing! lol...
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jsebastiano
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grazi ido! i feel a hell of a lot more at ease on this track so far... 1 down.... 8 to go...
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Bulls Hit
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Good effort!. No probs here on my cheapo speakers. Passionate outro..good stuff
VomitHatSteve
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Ha ha! Oh man! Your titles just get worse and worse!
I'd say there's a bit too much separation between the two guitar riffs. Hard panning like that makes it sound like they're not sharing a stage.
I do like the meandering panning on the wandering guitar during the verse.
I know I encouraged you re: the vocal pitchiness before, but it might be a bit too pronounced in this one.
I like the < 4 minute run time! Though what was with the cut off?
All-in-all, it was a pretty good mix. Nice work.
I'd say there's a bit too much separation between the two guitar riffs. Hard panning like that makes it sound like they're not sharing a stage.
I do like the meandering panning on the wandering guitar during the verse.
I know I encouraged you re: the vocal pitchiness before, but it might be a bit too pronounced in this one.
I like the < 4 minute run time!
Though what was with the cut off?All-in-all, it was a pretty good mix. Nice work.
FoulPhil
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It's not bad dude. It's not something I would normally listen to, but something about it makes it sound original and interesting to listen to. The guitars sounded a little wavy when ringing out from being slightly out of tune lol. Tons of stuff you could do different, but it's all a matter of taste. Just keep rocking.