Mix is pretty sparse, definitely has to have the video. I didn't hear anything that sounded bad. I did only listen on headphones as a reference.
I liked it... I do think it I would like it more if the vocals were a lot cleaner (less effects) and a little louder. At one point I wanted to hear a dreamy screaming bending (if there is such a thing) guitar riff or short solo just for an emotional boost. All in all very good. I liked the sparce mix , meaning not a lot of instruments or over production. Enjoyed it .. mark
when you say: "mix is sparse" you mean, bad mixing, or you talk about the song which could have more elements, or sound more characteristic? (or maybe both )
For me, this is much better then the other video. It is sexy. It's HUMAN. Excellent job.
I'm just curious though: Is that a real human vocal or that machine that sings for a human? It has a great tone.
So, I spend most of my day listening to trance music while I code. I didn't even look at the video.
This reminds me a lot of a track off Daft Punk's "Random Access Memory" Mix-wise, I'd say there could probably be a bit more high-end to open it up a bit. The whole mix is pretty understated, and for music like this, I think it works. I actually enjoyed the track a lot on its own. Good work.