I don't know enough about mandolin music to criticise the recordong. But if it means anything, it was like you were sitting right in front of me in a big room. Very clear and beautiful to my ears. Nice stuff.
That's cool! I like the mandolin. Very good playing. Very bright and good tone. It's well recorded too, don't really hear any noise. Good tune, I like that kind of stuff. That'd probably be fun tune to play for people.
Wow, nice clear sound. And some good playing. I'd say the mic is working for you. I actually have the same mic, and am pretty happy with it. What pre are you using?