opinion about mix? cyberpunk piano atmosphere

[bmbv project]

Hey guys, what do you think about the quality? It is my first attempt. The music has to be kinda repetitive, yet it should graduate and build atmosphere.
well, im not allowed to post a link, so check bmbv project on youtube - Animatrix Kid's Story - Barely Music, Barely Video Project

thanks for all replies and opinions!
Cheers

 

[mark skinner]

You only need a few posts or responding to a post (I think) before you can submit a song. 5 I think. Most people will move on if they can't get to your song in a click or two. Keep posting .. Cheers MS

 

[VomitHatSteve]

Yep. Give some feedback on a few other posts, then come back to edit your OP, and you'll be good to go.