Telegram Sam
New member
That's excellent!
A friend and I used to send the portastudio 4 track cassette back and forth in the mail!
That's excellent!
A friend and I used to send the portastudio 4 track cassette back and forth in the mail!
propman
Active member
Thanks Adam
I have the hugest Soul collection and I need to raid it more...theres tons of little samples I could raid and drop in tracks for some colour
Robs timings quite an improvement on mine...I wish I cared more about my vocals...I hope t employ some 26 year old female vocalist for either future projects or as a maid...not sure the wife will approve
btw got a poppy idea coming together Ill let you hear to see if it peaks your interest??
Sounds cool to me, KC!
PoeticIntensity
MagicJones.com (is a website)
Man, I hate it when I go a week without visiting this place.... So much to listen to. Anyway... I really like the new vocals on the 2nd track. The first track only had one nit from me... There was an arp that had a really poignant peak when it came around.... Listening to it at high volumes made me wince a bit there. Other than that, both sounded awesome on my ultra low-fi super-crap-a-delic ear buds here at work.
Good work, man.
Good work, man.
kcearl
I see deaf people
Thanks J....yup id have to agree with the arp comment, i noticed a couple of other little parts that were untidy too...ive got to give evrything a final mix before i send it to Jan so ill address them there..
Hope to hear your second electro track soon mate
Hope to hear your second electro track soon mate
iqi616
Yet another Mike
Super Jakes - Intro_Super Jakes.mp3
I'd want to work the vocal to bring it out a bit clearer - it's not just a level thing, I'd reach for the EQ, parallel compression, and some ducking. I'm not a fan of rap that stomps across the beat but this one gives enough of a nod to the music that it's not like the ones that sound like some guy nattering away in an empty karaoke bar. Arrangement-wise, it definitely needs a good middle-8. If there was one, I didn't notice it. I'd grab the outro and develop it and stick it in around 2/3 the way through.
Super Jakes - Cradle to the grave.mp3
I like the groove and there's more interest to the arrangement than in Intro. I'd be tempted to make a couple of subtle tweaks to the vocal but that's more personal preference and it really doesn't need it. Good work. Give it a cool video on YouTube and you could get some sales with this one.
I'd want to work the vocal to bring it out a bit clearer - it's not just a level thing, I'd reach for the EQ, parallel compression, and some ducking. I'm not a fan of rap that stomps across the beat but this one gives enough of a nod to the music that it's not like the ones that sound like some guy nattering away in an empty karaoke bar. Arrangement-wise, it definitely needs a good middle-8. If there was one, I didn't notice it. I'd grab the outro and develop it and stick it in around 2/3 the way through.
Super Jakes - Cradle to the grave.mp3
I like the groove and there's more interest to the arrangement than in Intro. I'd be tempted to make a couple of subtle tweaks to the vocal but that's more personal preference and it really doesn't need it. Good work. Give it a cool video on YouTube and you could get some sales with this one.
kcearl
I see deaf people
Hey thanks for taking time to listen too both and critique
Ill have a tweak at those vocals, they actually took a lot to sit in the mix as is so im struggling a little with them...ive been tweaking the middle break, i have to revisit each mix before mastering so mayb something will come up
It seems cradle seems to have hit the mark as far as keeping interst, i think its a direction id like to expand on, minus some of the harsher synths
Thanks again, ill def take your comments on board