
Abyyss
that's life
I probably should have posted this in the Songwriting section, but seeing as the feed back here is always good and strong and what-not, plus this is actually dedicated 2 hip-hop.... blah blah blah.....
Ya'll gonna hear me flow soon (don't worry, I'm using someone elses beat) - I decided that I should do what I do best (flow) before I start 2 try and do everything.
Anyway, I've got the first verse (out of 4 - they're not very long 'coz there's lot's of hooks) and a chorus on its way. But when I was practicing the chorus I started finding it easier to flow the lines a different way, so I changed the order, but then it seemed 2 make more sense the other way. So which one? Both have the same lyrics, just a different order:
1
One day everything you know is gonna go,
All you can do is grab the mic an' flow,
Eternity has never ever stooped this low,
But now's ya' chance, you got ya' skills to show,
Somehow you gotta let the whole world know,
How you can catch a moment and make it last forever, so,
Even though everything you know is gonna go,
You'll be fine as long as you just sit back an' flow.
2
One day everything you know is gonna go,
All you can do is grab the mic an' flow,
Somehow you gotta let the whole world know,
How you can catch a moment and make it last forever, so,
Even though everything you know is gonna go,
You'll be fine as long as you just sit back an' flow,
Eternity has never ever stooped this low,
But now's ya' chance, you got ya' skills to show.
Which one?
Ya'll gonna hear me flow soon (don't worry, I'm using someone elses beat) - I decided that I should do what I do best (flow) before I start 2 try and do everything.
Anyway, I've got the first verse (out of 4 - they're not very long 'coz there's lot's of hooks) and a chorus on its way. But when I was practicing the chorus I started finding it easier to flow the lines a different way, so I changed the order, but then it seemed 2 make more sense the other way. So which one? Both have the same lyrics, just a different order:
1
One day everything you know is gonna go,
All you can do is grab the mic an' flow,
Eternity has never ever stooped this low,
But now's ya' chance, you got ya' skills to show,
Somehow you gotta let the whole world know,
How you can catch a moment and make it last forever, so,
Even though everything you know is gonna go,
You'll be fine as long as you just sit back an' flow.
2
One day everything you know is gonna go,
All you can do is grab the mic an' flow,
Somehow you gotta let the whole world know,
How you can catch a moment and make it last forever, so,
Even though everything you know is gonna go,
You'll be fine as long as you just sit back an' flow,
Eternity has never ever stooped this low,
But now's ya' chance, you got ya' skills to show.
Which one?