Sounds really clean. I don't really like that cymbal bell sound in the left speaker. Can't really change it, but it's just an opinion. It sounds like you still have some processing/adding instruments to do before you're done though. Maybe layer some vocals during the chorus. I'd say a double track of the main vocals in the chorus, a lower harmony, and a higher one if possible. Strings would be nice in this song.
Thanks. I see what you mean about the cymbal bell. I may take that out... oh the joys of MIDI. I like the idea about adding vocal harmonies. I have never been particularly good at those, but maybe its time to learn.