New Tunes To Critique

[orbitaljoe]

Hey Gang,
Got so much great feedback on our first attempt at this, I was hoping you would take the time to lend an ear to the next 2 we've come up with. Again, any and all feedback is welcome.

Here's the link: http://www.nowhereradio.com/artists/album.php?aid=3352&alid=-1

Again thanks for your time, and ear!

Joe and Skip

 

[orbitaljoe]

Tap,Tap,Tap...Is This Thing On?

The songs aren't that bad are they? How bout some comments?

Thanks Guys
Joe

 

[DustyJack]

Man Your Songs are definitely original...not my preferred style to listen too.

You use the Special FX fairly well, A lot of work needs to be done on the vocals...since this music is so original to me I'm not sure exactly the sound you are going for...

Holes was my favorite of the 3. The other two just didn't do much for me.

DustyJack

PS - You'll probably get better feedback if you just post one song at a time, or let us know what song you want us to rip

 

[terrible_buddhi]

Nowhere to go:

Vox: I think you may be singing out of your range on 'go', try bringing that not down of up. The vox need to be brought forward more

Guitar: LOVE IT, sounds like REM circa reckoning

Bass: is there one?

Drums: lifeless...pump up the volume.

Song: worth working on...it could be catchy with everything sounding right.

 

[sloop]

OK

Nowhere to go--Could not hear the vocals at all- guitar sound etc--I don't care for but that is a personal thing. There are also some pitch issues with the vocals.

Way too much effects on everything, your relying on effects to make your stuff interesting--doesn't cut it with me.

Nice stuff for goofing around, but definitely not commercial.