New Tune--Shame

[mrface2112]

All.......just curious to know what you thought of this tune. Vocals aren't my strong suit, but i do ok (i think). ;-)

I play all instruments and will be glad to give more info if anyone wants it.

....just curious as to what y'all think and what it might be needing/missing, etc. I've not yet laid down any guitar solos.

It's called "Shame".

cheers,
wade

 

[Monkey Allen]

Yeah, good going. Straight up rock I guess. Reminds me of Steve Earle or something like that. The guitar is up front. No solo?

 

[rayc]

The guitars are:
TOO up front
Too much the same sound.
The bass is:
TOO far back
Too lacking in top & mids
The Drums are:
Pretty good.
Yeah the vocals lack pinache but then this isn't Boz Scaggs is it?
Needs some dynamics - b/vox etc.
Seems pretty good but it cut out & threw an error message 1/2 way through.