I actually find the song writing itself very easy to listen to and thought provoking. A nice melody line from your vocals (which are slightly off pitch here and there) but no big deal.
A very sweet sounding tune that would benefit greatly from a re-recording of the vocals and the rhythm guitar, mainly to remove the boxiness and the distant sounding lead vocals. Perhaps some tweaking with the EQ ever so slightly on those two particular tracks may even bring a little more presence to the guitar.
Your slide playing is suited to the tune in a very well rounded manner in a sense that it is minimal but enough to convey the message and the feel. Nice work!
I look forward to hearing this tune re-worked nukeitout!
Thanx for sharing!
Gorty