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[pcp]

i dont usually do this but i feel like i try my best to critique others tracks and i really want to see what kind of response our latest song gets. its called "In the Sun" . We kind of took a different direction with this one but i think its one of our best. any feedback would be appreciated. one.

 

[Murdock Jones]

I holdz no punches on my critiques, so I hope you can appreciate that. That's a nice sample flip, but I would beef up the beat a little more. Either use some harder drums or turn the one's you got up. The cuts need to be a little sharper too. You gotta do your songs as if your competing on a national level, doesn't matter if it's commercial or underground. That's how I roll, so that's how I tell it.