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was wondering if i could get some feedback on this tune i just wrote and recorded. i have had some bad input so far. i am new to this so i am just learning. most input i have had so far is not creative and bad mix and mastering hope to get some constructive advice on here thanks :)

song is addison


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=271716
 
bluess said:
was wondering if i could get some feedback on this tune i just wrote and recorded. i have had some bad input so far. i am new to this so i am just learning. most input i have had so far is not creative and bad mix and mastering hope to get some constructive advice on here thanks :)

song is addison


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=271716
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Sounds pretty cool! The one thing I would say as at the begining the soft hits on the guitar are too quiet. they sound more like noise that should have been cutt, out than somthing you wanted in the song. I don't know if you can fix it in the mix or not. I would personally be more deliberate in my playing and adjust the volume down in the mix not so much with my playing or adjustments on the guitar. It sounds a little like the amp is not getting enough to eat:) But you really have a good start on things. Cool stuff.

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Addison, freaky intro, nice. Nice car pic too for the song image. Sounds like the mix could use some more bass. Good sound to the guitars. Interesting moody piece, tune kind of sounds like it drops off into a drum beat and then is going to explode into another loud and climatic part, but then just ended. Maybe a bit more of an outro would be cool. Anyway, cool song man! As far as my ears are concerned, pretty good mix too! ;)
 
More outro as it ends unresolved & unsatisfactorily.
Beef up the light parts of the intro.
Interesting choice of synth sounds - I though Starcastle were coming back!
Guitar tones are nice & guitary.
 
wow! this is really cool. it reminds me of steve vai and dream theatre somewhat. I can't tell if there is bass in there. If so, turn it up! Add some cool shreds in there and maybe change it up completely in the middle or somethin.
 
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