
Not my thing but generally really good. Creative use of sounds. Well performed.
My only nit was there was a lack of presence in vocal and the distorted guitar. The guitar was very distorted. Generally not what you want to do, but the way you're using it here it might be OK. It's just missing energy above 3K or so. The vocal could use a boost somewhere around 4k - 6k or so.
The beat is pretty relentless, but I suspect that is more stylistic choice than anything? .