New song "It's You" Need advice on the song! =]

[14yearoldkid]

Heyyyyyy I just posted a new song i finished recording... The song is called "It's you".

A couple of days I also posted a song called "A hudson memory" I didn't get much critique or advice on that one so maybe you can give them both a shot =] Thanks for your time!


"It's You" and "A hudson memory"... www.myspace.com/bxany


Any comments or advice are greatly appreciated, thank you wonderful community.

 

[Detroitroadrage]

Sorry, dont do MYSPACE.

 

[14yearoldkid]

=[ damn, Ok Im gonna go put it on soundclick asap. =]

 

[greyharmonix]

i've heard your other songs and i liked them but the vocals on this one aren't up to par. theres alot p poping noises and breathiness, and there's a long held note in there that catch my attention in a bad way. i'd definitely redo the vocals.

 

[atswafford]

It's You -

The intro sounds really intriguing. You are very talented. One thing that stands out is it didn't nessicarily sound like everything else that's out there. Which is a very good thing. The vocals could use some perfecting, but who's couldnt?

A Hudson Memory -

I don't think the intro does this one justice. Of the two I believe this is the better one. I really like the melody you use at around between :50 - :55 seconds.

Either way. You are definitely talanted. I look forward to hearing more from you.

 

[14yearoldkid]

Heyy guys! Thanks for listening to it. Yeah I was never really happy with the vocals on "it's you" I was just so eager to post it! I will definitely re-do the vocals. I think u hear those popping and breathy sounds because I raised the output gain of the compression wayyy too much. I'm going to Audio Engineering school here in NYC so I'm learning a lot about recording techniques and whatnot. Thanks again for the advice and kind comments. =]