new song if anyone wants to hear

[a27thletter]

just finished up this little tune, its definitely not my best recording ever but i'm happy enough with it at the moment. check it out, i love feedback, positive and negative.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.cfm?bandID=672456&songID=5524751

 

[ido1957]

I always like your mixes Barry. They are bright, bold and clean.

"The problem with love" section really could use something different to jazz it up a bit. The song seems a bit repetitive. Maybe take that line up a few notes...

The solo sounds good - nice bite to the lead sound.

Good lyrics too...

 

[Track Rat]

Not bad. I kept waiting for drums and such to kick in. I think the clean electric guitar was giving me that impression. Personally, If I were going to keep it this sparse, I'd of made the acoustic guitar more prominant and mixed the electric down more. Still, not bad at all.

 

[jamesduysen]

I like it. IMO you could put some lo's in the bass, take out a few highs from it and it would sound a little fuller.

Nice job,

-jD