new song - holla back

[gullyjewelz]

oh n b - i sent u da 2nd draft of where u at . . . get at me . . . the singer is EXTREMELY new to the studio - what yall think? she stand a chance at workin out or is a dud a dud? be honest!!! and that goes for the track, concept, verses, etc. . .
http://soundclick.com/share?songid=6125524

holla back

and some body tell RAFAGAS to holla back, if yall knowz him! he did the track

 

[Physical Ill]

The singer seemed off beat...and uncomfortable behind the mic (kinda like me a while ago!) but you said shes new so I guess you can't expect all too much.

The verse is solid though.

 

[gullyjewelz]

well yea she was uncomfortable thats for sure . . im hopin if i can get her into the studio more - she will "find herself" . . .

 

[bknot1]

Yeah. I got the verse..that verse is on point....

ON TOO THE SONG..

I think she has potential...might want to get her to do a few more takes when recording....the more comfortable she get the better she will get... also the song is nice,,just wish on her last part of the singing or chorus ..ya'll would have gave her a bit more control to change it up abit..but other then that this is a nice song

 

[bknot1]

Gully how many vocal take do you do when recording.. I hear at least 4...plus ablibs...

nice work

 

[Trumpspade]

Song is tight!

I am not feeling the vocals at all!
Like Phys said it is off beat and extremely flat in many areas.....You know I'm honest! I don't even think she has potential, and if she does, she has a looong way to go! The hook is pretty simple, I don't think nerves or being new is making her sing the way she does. (I'm just not hearing that!) I'm very critical on singers, they can mess a good song up, and that is what she did!

But you did good work on it!

 

[gullyjewelz]

well i wrote the hook, i had actually wrote several pieces to the hook but she didnt have time to get through the session that i had planned. . .. im doin posts on craigslist (lol) tryin to find a singer .. . not much luck wit dat sight either . . .