Hey man, this stuff is actually good. It's not really the type of music that gets posted around here, so I wouldn't expect too many comments. Luckily, the is (almost) exactly my kind of music. I was heavily into Green Day for a long time, as well as a lot of other GOOD punk bands. Your voice is sort of deep and slightly gruff and it reminds me of those days. "Punk" bands today like New Found Glory and Simple Plan piss me off with their songs about gay shit and their high girly voices. They sound like fags. Your voice is what definately made me like this.
I also like how you kept the song simple (but good) and didn't clutter it with too much crap. It's much better than all the emo pop punk shit thats been surfacing lately.
I think another reason I like this is because it reminds me of me. I used to play in a band like this in high school and it was great. Around age 20 I went through some sort of second puberty and my voice has become incredibly deep. I'm just now starting to write again, and my deep voice and pop punk background is making for some interesting music.
I'd say keep doing what you are doing, but maybe try to distance yourself from all this wussy pop punk garbage thats popular now and create something that is still nice and melodic, but not all gay and girly like Simple Plan or something. Lately I've been heavily influenced by bands that were way before my time like The Who and '70s bands like Grand Funk and Thin Lizzy. They had awesome songs but still maintained this manly awesome presence. I know calling music "girly" or "manly" may sound dumb, but I hope you get the point.
fucking good song dude
how old are you?