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BALKI
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no comments? I know i fucked up on lil points but it was solid "2 me"
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onlydude
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Sup man, just curious what are you using to record? I am listening to it and in my opinion the vocals are way too loud. They overpower the beat. See if you can tone down the vocals a lot and get the vocals to sit on top of the beat and get a nice balance. I cant tell if turning down the volume on the vocals will help at all, or if it is the way they was recorded.
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onlydude
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Peeped some of your other music, and the loud vocals are consistent with all your songs. Also, when you record try to feel the beat more and just vibe to it. Right now it just sounds like you are kinda just reading off of a piece of paper. So give those a try and see what happens 
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Murdock Jones
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DO REMEMBER IN THIS FORUM YOU GET WHAT YOU GIVE... IF YOU ARE NOT ONE WHO IS ACTIVE IN GIVING FEEDBACK, DON'T EXPECT A LOT TO BE GIVEN......
I'd say the same as dude said. I don't know if you're freestyling or making a song. I would suggest riding the beat more myself, or you could be just doing that MF Doom type of style. Regardless it sounds like your reading. If so you need to memorize your verses, so you can put more feeling in them.
I'd say the same as dude said. I don't know if you're freestyling or making a song. I would suggest riding the beat more myself, or you could be just doing that MF Doom type of style. Regardless it sounds like your reading. If so you need to memorize your verses, so you can put more feeling in them.
Fieva
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Like others said...vocals are way too loud and it does sound like your reading. Don't get it twisted, I don't see anything wrong with reading your lines...but practice and practice it as you write so you can map out the overall feel of the song. That way, the words are right there in front of your face, but only to remember the plans you had in your head.
When I hear the track, I don't see any feeling in it. No cockiness, no amped up attitude, no melancholy, no anger, happiness....just empty reading.
Step your game up, you can do better than that...dedicate yourself to your craft
And that's real,
Fie.
When I hear the track, I don't see any feeling in it. No cockiness, no amped up attitude, no melancholy, no anger, happiness....just empty reading.
Step your game up, you can do better than that...dedicate yourself to your craft
And that's real,
Fie.
peritus
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LOL... didn't see this other thread... Oh wow...