New r&b song need some advice

[thegatekeeper]

hey guys, this little mp3 is an introduction of what is to come with this song, tell me what you guys think. I just heard that the second set of chimes there is some small distortion will fix that.

http://media.putfile.com/Basta-28

 

[rayc]

The snare is brittle & the there's not much bottom end anywhere to be found.
Sounds very delicate & in need of some robust RNB.

 

[junplugged]

that compression hurts on the high end

 

[thegatekeeper]

I didn't add any compression anywhere, and it's weird that it's lacking bass, my monitors are like crazy shaking the whole house. Maybe I should get some more bass traps.....

 

[thegatekeeper]

any more comments please